Okay, bit of feedback time. Mixed thoughts and a few ideas raised to continue with, moving in to the crit I wasn't 100% confident and struggling with a little bit of a direction to work from. 'Bringing people together' I knew was working, just how to apply it and by how much. I took my chocolate type, money and screen experiments and saw what people thought.
The message of what was trying to be protrayed was a little lost just by itself, maybe not the right choice of medium for type? In the crit I did need to explain a little bit too much which proves things weren't working, but I did get a few positive feedback points to work from. The suggested cards as another dimension and range to the designs went down well, a way of sharing skype my handing cards out looks like a good direction to take.
Okay, so a few notes I made. Business cards good, but the typefaces need to be re-enforced alittle more. Try variations of the chocolate and placement of the advertising to give more context. What could be a good variation of chocolate could be dusting chocolate.. one I want to try straight away.
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